Story & Rhythm Notes

Instinct-Driven Story & Editing Consultant

Helping filmmakers improve story clarity, structure, and emotional rhythm across script and edit.

What I work on

Narrative Flow

  • Story outlines & treatments that need clarity or structure

  • Scripts that feel “off” but you can’t identify why

Editing Rhythm

  • Pacing, rhythm, and emotional flow in scenes

  • Editorial instincts for rough cuts and sequences

My Approach

I focus on instinct-driven feedback: what the story is trying to do beneath the surface, where attention drops, and how to restore clarity and momentum.

Services

Story Diagnosis (Outlines / Treatments)
Quick breakdown of structure, clarity, and direction.Script Notes
Feedback focused on pacing, engagement, and narrative flow.Editing Consultation
Rhythm, scene structure, and what to tighten or remove.Live Session (Optional)
30–60 min walkthrough of your project.

Testimonials

"I received a phone consultation with Diego of 'Story and Rhythm' for a script outline, followed by written comments that expanded on our conversation.I found his comments to be both perceptive and well-grounded in both story theory and the craft of screenwriting in the current moviemaking environment.During our phone call we agreed on most things. We disagreed on a few (as you'd expect), but in all cases he made excellent points and encouraged me to think more deeply about the choices I've made. He also gave excellent suggestions for alternatives that could sharpen and deepen the story craftsmanship, places where I was unclear, and reasonable suggestions for how to proceed.His turnaround time was quick and he kept all of the promises in his advertisement.I highly recommend his service."LM Perkins
Rolling Thunder Media

Status

Current Work

Working with independent filmmakers and writers on a small number of projects while developing this practice.

Contact

email: [email protected]

Open to collaborations, story feedback, and editing consultation.